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Default Help analyse this? - 11-08-2010, 02:14 PM

Hey guys this guy in my class wrote this poem and I have to analyse it for my english class... but I really have no idea what he meant by his poem.

Can you guys help me? This is his poem:


The Slaves

The constant motion
Going around a circle
Are they really alive?
Every day is the same yet
Every day the work is harder
The burden they carry
Growing with every step

The weights will soon
Grow too heavy for
Them to carry
And stop their work
Bringing down the slaves
That had to carry them
Why didnít anyone help them?

The only ones that wanted to help
Couldnít do a thing
They had to watch each other
Fall one by one
None of them flourished
They were all the same in the end
They were all tired and beaten
Glad to finally
Get their rest
  
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Default 11-08-2010, 02:16 PM

Erm... It's pretty straight forward...

It's about the struggle of slaves, as far as I can tell. o.O...
  
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Default 11-08-2010, 02:19 PM

hmm... well it seems to me that he is explaining what all they left behind when they died. that they are in a better place now that they dont have to be pushed around and beaten anymore. they are no longer slaves, and they get to "rest".


pretty much everyone died and its for the better, because they are no longer slaves?



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Default 11-08-2010, 02:20 PM

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Erm... It's pretty straight forward...

It's about the struggle of slaves, as far as I can tell. o.O...
I agree, it's basically saying how hard times for the slaves were hard.

Very good work though, I like it.




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Default 11-08-2010, 02:24 PM

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Erm... It's pretty straight forward...

It's about the struggle of slaves, as far as I can tell. o.O...
Yeah thats all it is, Talks about the burden they carry and how much they suffered.
  
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Default 11-08-2010, 02:24 PM

That sounds good for the poem. Anyone think anything different?
  
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Default 11-08-2010, 02:26 PM

Umm... just how they worked til they died and how no one could help them.


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Default 11-11-2010, 04:34 PM

Can anyone else think of anything different?
  
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Default 11-11-2010, 04:43 PM

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hmm... well it seems to me that he is explaining what all they left behind when they died. that they are in a better place now that they dont have to be pushed around and beaten anymore. they are no longer slaves, and they get to "rest".


pretty much everyone died and its for the better, because they are no longer slaves?



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Default 12-09-2010, 06:47 PM

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Erm... It's pretty straight forward...

It's about the struggle of slaves, as far as I can tell. o.O...
thats what I was thinking


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