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Default Someone help me out here - 09-29-2011, 04:32 PM

So, my English 12 teacher decides that we should pick up the pace as far as homework goes.

Today I had no school, and aside from being on SG I was writing down some points that I should include in the 2-3 page essay that she assigned to be completed in one day.

I already started, but that just means I got my name and the first paragraph that introduces what the essay is based upon, and what I will be including and talking about all throughout the essay.

I have to find 3 SPECIFIC types of propaganda, and how it controls society. Naturally, the first three most controversial topics I could think of was Religion, the Military, and Major Corporations and advertisement.

When I mean specific, I mean which religion has done this, when did they do it, examples of the types of propaganda used, then I have to explain HOW it is controlling society.

This is the bitch part. I was typing along, and this is where I'm stuck as far as religion goes.

Help is very much appreciated.

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Default 09-29-2011, 04:36 PM

Idk what you want from me... but this

needs to be a semicolon

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Default 09-29-2011, 04:43 PM

Well now you need to introduce the MAIN bit that you're writing this essay about, Eg: Propaganda was First discovered in Blah Blah Blah.... It was Heavily Endorsed in....
hopefully that helped a little lel I failed my English Exam so Sorry if this was Pointless <3

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Default 09-29-2011, 04:45 PM

ww2/1 liberty bonds propaganda theres a lot
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Default 09-29-2011, 05:27 PM

Originally Posted by Mbs View Post
Idk what you want from me... but this

needs to be a semicolon
It could actually go either way; it could use a comma or it could use a semicolon. It's very much dependent on how you read it that creates an error or not. It talks about propaganda being information, then departs and talks about the types of propaganda, hence "especially of a biased or misleading nature" and then goes back to how it's used. If you took out the in between message located inside the commas, it would read as so:

"Propaganda is information that is often used..."

My turn. I suggest you not use Google's dictionary for definitions. Not saying they are wrong but put them in your own words. Also, don't use contractions in essays. English teachers along with other people who score essays become very picky with grammar nowadays.

"Below is a 1950's - 1960's Christianity propaganda poster."

Change the above to the following: "To right illustrates a Christianity poster that occurred from the 1950's - 1960's."

Why is there a huge amount of space from the first paragraph to the second? It doesn't look right. You talked about Christianity yet you haven't talked about Judaism, Hinduism and the others? Why not? Are you trying to get more information on Christianity before moving on to others? If you're trying to get more, talk about why it's wrong for Christianity, or any other religion for that matter, to try and force/persuade others to follow their religion when everyone should use their own mind and decide for themselves. They also shouldn't be degrading Americans, or any other country, just because some/most people are not of Christianity.

Hope this helped. If you need more, don't hesitate to ask!

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Default 09-29-2011, 07:07 PM

Thanks for your opinions everyone. I finished it all up with the help of Rodrigues to get the best idea of what I really wanted / needed to talk about.

Not as bad as I thought it would be, and I think it came out pretty well.

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